Need a pitch deck

Description

I have created a pitch deck with all the necessary content, but investors have told me it’s too wordy. While the information is all there, I need someone who can restructure and rewrite it to be more concise, ensuring the key points stand out without losing important details."
This version keeps the message clear and direct while removing redundancy. If you'd like to refine this further or need help with specific parts of the deck, feel free to share!