Need my pitch deck revamped including content & design

详细信息

I have created a pitch deck presentation with all the necessary content, but investors have told me it’s too wordy. While the information is all there, I need someone who can restructure and rewrite it to be more concise, ensuring the key points stand out without losing important details.
I am not looking for a designer more a writer as i have the design might need slight ajustments but the most important part is the content