Seeking Editor / Proofreading for 2nd Edition Novel

Description

This is the 2nd edition version of my novel. My novel contains 45,927 words in total, 138 pages long, font style Times, and font size 11. My novel genre is romantic fiction and my target audience are women or anyone from the new age spiritual community. This project requires you to sign a None-Disclosure Agreement. I’m seeking the following assistance:
* Critical Reader: Provide feedback on the story by analyzing and evaluating the quality, logic, and characters in the story. Help identify any contradictions or any confusing ideas or concepts that needs further explanation, clarity, or improvement. Your feedback and opinion should be added in my Novel survey. Your honest feedback would be highly appreciated. 

* Editor
* Proofreader
* Ghost Writer: You will be encouraged to provide suggestion for improvement. These suggestions could be related to adding more emotions to the story telling or changing the style or the way of describing something. For example, I have written
“I ride my bike down the street and then I noticed Jenny. I decided to say hi to her.”
However, you would suggestion this better:

“I ride my bike down the street against the cold wind and then I spotted Jenny walking her dog on the side walk. I became hypnotize by the beauty of her fiery red hair fluttering against the wind. My heart starts beating and the coldness I felt dissolves by the blood flowing through my veins.”