Story Outline Analysis

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STORY ANALYSIS Do we understand where we are, in time, location, and context?Is the narrative arc consistent?Is the story structure comprehensible?Is the narration progression fluid and coherent?Do we have a clear and meaningful conflict?Do we have consistent tension and suspense?Are the resolution and climax consistent and well-defined?Are characters having strong personalities (enough to sustain a story)? Are characters clearly described? Do we need a mini-bio?Are the character's wants and driving needs, desires, and/or ambitions well presented?Do we understand the hero’s problems and objectives?What about the quality of the descriptions (“show, don’t tell”)Are questions answered? Are there remaining questions?Are emotions well described?- body language description.- characters' visceral reactions & symptoms description.- dialogues.- characters' tone of voice description.- characters thoughts description.- POV character mood description- POV experience description. - similes and comparisons.- secret emotions, suppressed emotions, faked feelings, denials.- emotional intensity variations | emotional layering.